Crafty, sneaky subplots. Distracting me from the story at hand and sucking me into making you not suck. And then you go and pull the big swerve on me.
In other words, I had a bit of a profound thought tonight, and not the good kind. It’s going to make a lot more work for me, but hopefully the end result will be better.
Amount needed to fix: Oh, the last hundred and fifty pages or so.